Wednesday, April 5, 2017

Post 21: Poem

Where is the beauty in my life?
Why its in the love from my father and his wife.
With out them what would i do?
Why, my life would be so dark and blue.

3 comments:

  1. Totally agree, bro. My life would for sure be a mess if my parents were not there to raise me.

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  2. Short, sweet, and to the point. I like it! I also agree, seeing as how my parents are still major parts of my life. Good work!

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  3. That's inspiring that you look up to your parent's marriage and love so much. I can't say the same for me - divorce can be a messy thing. But, this poem reassures us that true love and a successful, long-lasting marriage is possible and beautiful. You put the significance of their love in your life in a short poem and you did a good job at it!:)

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